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I just got it, I'll read it.
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METALLlC BLUE
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John, I updated it and "finished" it. I've cut a lot of things, so I don't know how you'll feel, but I've also kept a ton too. I've reworked and smoothed transitions, and removed much of the incogruency, and tedious detail and redundancy.
However, I also added some tedious detail for educational purposes, rather than for explaining personal events.
I would treat this like an "Afterword/About The Author" but I would name it:
The Journey Of Making MALIKAR: The Authors Life History & Perspective
It is my hope you will find some of it useful and be able to adapt it further to whatever conclusive piece of writing you are aiming for. I may have left mistakes, as it was only a first draft edit. Usually a professional re-edits at least 3 times. It did end up taking about 4 hours to do, but I saw the potential in it and figured you might appreciate it.
-- Michael
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